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SmileX..
by sulex00
One day you woke up all of a sudden. Your like a slime and robot hybrid. You remembered that your name is SlimeX. There are obstacles you see. You decide to go where you see land.
Chapter 2
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Matt100 3 years ago
Controls Game GraphicsNice work needs better graphics
Matt100 3 years ago
Also you cant see all textsulex00 3 years ago
Thank you for the comment. These issues are going to be fixed soon and I am trying my best to make better graphics. I am not a skilled artist.LastDeadMouse50 3 years ago
Story/Writing/Dialogue Level DesignPros:
* The concept is interesting
* I like games like this that just drop you in and give you time to learn what to do.
* Controls were intuitive enough.
* Graphics were fine and could simply be a low-res style that you can develop. (It probably looks less good to people when seeing the debug text [I assume is debug text] plastered against the background like "You found a secret", etc.)
Cons:
* The controls were a little inconsistent. I was able to double-jump for a short while, and then I couldn't anymore for reasons I could not decipher.
* The effect of zooming back to start for touching a slime is a bit jarring and tough punishment.
* The left side of the starter area is just an invisible barrier. Might want to add something visual so it looks like a barrier.
* I like exploring and learning what things do, but I'm collecting purple coins with no idea why I'm collecting them or what they will be used for.
* Music is a bit repetitive. There's actually a good selection of stuff to find in Creative Commons 0 on Freesound.org. It's worth a look.
* The concept is interesting
* I like games like this that just drop you in and give you time to learn what to do.
* Controls were intuitive enough.
* Graphics were fine and could simply be a low-res style that you can develop. (It probably looks less good to people when seeing the debug text [I assume is debug text] plastered against the background like "You found a secret", etc.)
Cons:
* The controls were a little inconsistent. I was able to double-jump for a short while, and then I couldn't anymore for reasons I could not decipher.
* The effect of zooming back to start for touching a slime is a bit jarring and tough punishment.
* The left side of the starter area is just an invisible barrier. Might want to add something visual so it looks like a barrier.
* I like exploring and learning what things do, but I'm collecting purple coins with no idea why I'm collecting them or what they will be used for.
* Music is a bit repetitive. There's actually a good selection of stuff to find in Creative Commons 0 on Freesound.org. It's worth a look.
sulex00 3 years ago
thank you this will help me a lot!Roast Em
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