Dreams

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Almost 3 years ago my brother passed away from an overdose. I couldn't sleep for months. Usually it would be maybe an hour of sleep or maybe two hours, per night. Around the 4 month, after he had passed, I had a dream about him and the afterlife. This is my short story of that dream. #other #afterlife #shortstory

 

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roozadventures 3 years ago

UI Graphics Game Graphics
i liked the colors that u used
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Ayush_Dutt1 3 years ago

Game Graphics
Wow, game graphics and game working is good, and which version of RPG Maker did you used man, Vx Ace or MV or XP.
I use VX Ace, I am still working on a game...

You made really good game, keep it up...
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JustAnotherNick 1 year ago

Story/Writing/Dialogue
I really enjoyed the way you put your feelings inside this... story. It's more of a "story" than a "game". There were a couple times I was really, really moved.
I sincerely hope putting everything into this work helped you out.

I was going to mark "game mechanics" as the point which needs the most work, but then I decided to leave that post void. The guide often says, things cannot be changed. Hence, there is no need to add the possibility for me to change how the story unfolds.
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